Yes, it'll definitely take some time for Morag to adjust to her new role (assuming she ever fully does). It's not something she can turn off and on. I'm glad you liked the scene with Nia! Now that Morag is officially a member of the party, there will be more moments with the other characters. The journey to Tantal is really the first time in the story where the group is together and not rushing into dire circumstances. I considered jumping ahead to keep the action going, but spending time fleshing out their relationships with each other felt better. There would be no reason to believe they are affected so much by later events if they don't build genuine bonds.
I got back yesterday from taking a horde of students to a conference, so now it's time to edit and post the next chapter! Thanks for always reading and reviewing!
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fallenrose24 on Chapter 1 Sun 09 Nov 2025 10:25PM UTC
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